User blog comment:Nobody700/What If: Alien Invasion arc part 9/@comment-3045030-20160116025503

Correction:


 * "Melzelgald"... Melz a lgald

Commentary:


 * But i thought ugliness was his weakness (i guess it was because Melzalgald wasn't a real Ugmon... and yes i know ZombieMan was talking, by the way... you think Sweet Mask didn't fight the Sea King cuz he was a possible Ugmon?).


 * Homo Zombieus... lol (i'm assuming that's another joke about Dr. Genus' sexuality).


 * I know Melzalgald's body wasn't the strongest, but Eyelashes... sheesh.


 * "LET IT RIP"... 1. He has a Beyblade? | 2. Ewww Melzalgald, can't you hold it?


 * "Cut up", i don't have anything against them, but i do hope they died, because... well remember what happend with Iairon? (when he cut off his arm, he did a lot of damage behind him... A LOT of damage)


 * With Lash... great, i'll tell Daisy (and Black Bolt)


 * "DON'T YOU SAY THAT" "I enjoyed serving you" "NOOOO!"... lol


 * Some sharp lashes... oh well.


 * So Metal Bat finding the marbels and learning it was his heart... that meant nothing to you (Metal Bat Fans! ATTACK!!!)


 * "His brain, was trying to kill himself"... it's fine i guess, but here are 2 more options (still it's ok the way it is): "His brain, was trying to kill him" "His brain was trying to destroy itself"


 * Not just here... but the way you exaggerate (over exaggerate) powers... oh sheesh.