User blog comment:Nobody700/What If: Alien Invasion arc part 6/@comment-3045030-20160112005252

Corrections:

1) "He was saw" (He saw)

2) "Atomic Damurai"

3) "kicked himself" (Himself?)

4) "my own old bones" (my old bones?... why own? does Groribas look ancient to you?)

5) "screamed in top of his lungs" (at the top of his lungs)

Commentary:


 * Can copy speed and strength? sheesh


 * "if i didn't despise you" harsh... and why?


 * Screamed for more energy?... Ok.


 * Borse... is it racist that it makes me think of him as a bit Russian? (... Borscht)