Talk:Saitama/@comment-173.52.59.151-20160824063635

Personality section, paragraph four has a mess of an opening. I'd fix it but since no one can edit the page... also paragraph five has a massive run on sentence for an opening. Three commas, far too many. When you've gone past two you should start a new sentence. Next paragraph! "Being well able" what is "well able"? Shouldn't it be "being able to"? Also " Having picked up a number of hints to Sonic's own persona on their first meeting and when two tank top heroes jealously plotted to ruin him after the meteor event that there were irate and self-serving hero types like them"  is not a sentence. Oh my god an then the next paragraph "Saitama has been shown to show" jesus, "Saitama has shown" reading this page gave me a headache. I don't mean to be rude, but this is seriously some bad writing. Whoever edits and mods this shit needs to get on it.